Reviewer: Clell65619 (Anonymous) · Date: May 21 2010 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 3

I love your Gomez... To my mind you've captured the way John Astin played the character...

Reviewer: purrfus (Anonymous) · Date: Nov 20 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 3

I was reading the recent update and had the urge to re-read the story.

Reading this I can remember how entranced I was with the world you were creating. Its also kinda of a shock because I've become accustomed to the relationships between the characters as they exist in Chapter 67/68. Going back to the beginning when they're still trying to figure themselves out makes me really appreciate just how far you've brought this in a relatively short amount of time. Good work.

Reviewer: impatientuser (Signed) · Date: Jan 23 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 3

"You will not."

I love Wednesday.  You write her and Xander so well. 

Reviewer: gail (Anonymous) · Date: Aug 18 2008 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 3

Sky high expectations are being met. Nice freaking everyone out.

Where Xander is discussing his home life with Hermione and Wednesday, he indicates he live with his parents - it might flow better to use loves his parents.

First chapter - dire wolf pup. I know there hasn't been mention of anybody else's, but it seems a shame to waste it. 

 

Reviewer: rafmere (Signed) · Date: Aug 13 2008 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love this story.

more please.

Raf 

Reviewer: lucifael (Signed) · Date: Aug 10 2008 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 3

As usual fabulous, I'm now fairly curious to know which black sister we're talking.  In all honesty it could be any of them from what i know of the history.  Tho more than likely it ain't Bella.

It's the prewitt that makes me wonder because i had always thought that the only Prewitt I know was at least a few years ahead....

It's fairly pointless to say I'm looking forward to more, cuz you know I am :D 

Reviewer: Wraithrune (Anonymous) · Date: Aug 10 2008 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 3

^_^ nice! Xander surviving x'mas with the addams.

Reviewer: dave (Anonymous) · Date: Aug 10 2008 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 3

gleefully chuckles

Reviewer: cobra (Signed) · Date: Aug 10 2008 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 3

yet again i'm laughing at the end. i can't wait to see what Pugsley has in store for Xander. Although it would be cool for Gomez to show him a little in the fencing department. I look forward to the next installment.

Reviewer: Ronin100 (Anonymous) · Date: Aug 10 2008 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 3

Xander Harris and Wednesday Addams...brilliant if scary combo.
This could be a lot of fun, can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: SFBKludge (Signed) · Date: Aug 10 2008 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 3

Please please I want Snape torture.

 

He's scum that JKR tried redeeming in the final books. His attitude towards students though convinces me that he has no call to even be in the same building, let alone teach.

I won't say that the Trio didn't deserve a fair bit of what they brought down on themselves. Just that Snape never seemed to regret having to be a right %&&^#ard. If he had shown even the slightest regret I might not hate the character more than Voldy, but he never showed his remorese.

Reviewer: Warren (Signed) · Date: Aug 10 2008 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 3

interesting info on the Coven that made the book. nice to see the school didn't brainwash everyone who went through it.


so Hermione is spending time with Harry's crew and Xander's crew. interesting. she must be dead tired at the end of the day between school work,helping Harry and Ron, and studying with Xander and Wednesday.

great story looking forward to your next chapter.

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