Reviewer: Clell65619 (Anonymous) · Date: May 21 2010 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 5

- I don't think I've ever seen Tonks in Slytherin... Most put her into Hufflepuff or Ravenclaw. Interesting.

- You're right. What does Filch do anyway?

Reviewer: Sancria (Anonymous) · Date: Apr 29 2010 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 5

“What? Nonsense!! What could be more wholesome than children playing!?”

hahaha, how wonderfully twisted. This is so far, an amazingly true to character with the Addams.

Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 01 2008 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 5

the anticipation builds...

Reviewer: mrpietan (Signed) · Date: Aug 31 2008 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hmm .. a little vague in spots .. but over all .. it was good .. I see you've introduced the "Heir" sub-plot ... I would have hoped, someone would have mentioned it ... Not sure how Narcissa would have in the book, but it'd be a stretch ... What about Malfoy?  Maybe going on that Hermoine doesn't have a Family Vault .. thus He is better because He does (as one of the "points" in the argument for being better than Heirmoine) .. anyway .. tis good overall and glad to see you keeping up with this one ... :)

Reviewer: rafmere (Signed) · Date: Aug 31 2008 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 5

Thanks for another great chapter.

Raf

Reviewer: Fyrecat (Anonymous) · Date: Aug 30 2008 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 5

As usual, this chapter was great! ...But painfully short!  

 Hopefully that means that you'll be updating everything soon? 

I realize that you're working on several projects simultaneously, but I really am an impatient sort when it comes to waiting to read the next chapter in a story I am enjoying. 

 

Anyhow, Thanks for sharing, I really am enjoying all of your stories immensely! 

Reviewer: tremerid (Signed) · Date: Aug 29 2008 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 5

Nice intro for Tonks. This chapter, at least in my opinion also showcased how Xander is slowly being "corrupted" to the Addamses way of thinking. I'm really liking where this is going.

 

Keep up the great work!

 

Regards,

 

--Tremerid

Reviewer: godwynn (Signed) · Date: Aug 28 2008 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 5

I have not laughed this hard reading a story for the longest time. Please keep this story up and running, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Warren (Signed) · Date: Aug 28 2008 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 5

 “Tell you what, take your time, come up with a reason or two, and we’ll do this again.” Xander said after a moment, smirking perhaps a little too childishly for his own good. “In the meantime, lets eat.”
 

that's gonna leave a mark. on the plus side if Xander keeps hitting Draco with a clue by 4 upside the head maybe his father's genes will be knocked down enough for Narcissa's genes to come to the fore front.


with the book,Tonks and help from the elves no matter what happens Xander is gonna be the first snake to earn the respect of the twins.

great story looking forward to your next chapter.

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: Aug 28 2008 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 5

Very enjoyable. The Addams are wonderfully done as ever and it was a real treat to get an insight into Narcissa. It's also the first time that I can recall Tonks being a Slytherin.

Looking forward to developments.

Thanks

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