Reviewer: lufio (Signed) · Date: Sep 11 2008 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 9

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New developments.
Good to see his "Family"
Joining the story.

-[ Ah, so we finally get to meet representatives of the magical potion of the Harris and LaVelle lines. More plot threads have been put into play. Excellent.

Interesting to see the use of magical genes to imbue wizards and squibs with supernatural toughness.

The spelling of the LaVelle name kept changing in this fic. You should probably decide which one you're going to use. ]-

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 10 2008 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 9

I love this explanation for Xander's toughness.

Raf

Reviewer: mrpietan (Signed) · Date: Sep 10 2008 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 9

Ok .. are you going to have Xander ask about the Lavelle and Harris' over in England .. After all, if he is from a long and distinguished line of them, is he an "heir" ? ... Ask the book .. what does the book say .. *grin*

Reviewer: Essex (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 09 2008 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 9

I loved the chapter and am thrilled by the frequent updates. I'd been wondering if Xander's estranged pureblood relatives would start circling like vultures once they learned of his magical status.

I hope to see a bit of Willow before Xander has to go back to school.

Reviewer: lucifael (Signed) · Date: Sep 09 2008 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 9

Oh man, you got me seriously hooked now, coming out of left field like that.  I THINK I have an idea of what you're doing and considering I nail plot lines in TV shows now, (Which is why I don't watch it anymore), is quite an achievement ;)

 

I just really liked that part, lol.

Reviewer: kcl (Signed) · Date: Sep 09 2008 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 9

Ah-ha! Some things are finally starting to make sense. What a great idea to have Xander's ancestry tightly bound to the purebloods. This sure is becoming a fun story!

By the way, how many years of Hogwarts at you planning for this story?

Reviewer: DeathGod666 (Signed) · Date: Sep 09 2008 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 9

This would explain why Sam is the way he is in Burn Notice.  Damn now I am imagining what would happen if Sam ever called Xander for help.

Snicker 

 

Reviewer: Warren (Signed) · Date: Sep 09 2008 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 9

 “This is ancient history, Madame Levalle,” Marcus muttered, “And entirely over the boys head. You’re wasting your time, and ours.”

  “My time is my own, Marcus Harris, and you are free to leave.” She retorted icily.



Marcus sounds like a person who over estimates his own importance and intelligence. Madame Levalle  sounds interesting and is smart enough to know not alienate a possible future ally by talking down to them. 

“Well, trust me, you’re tough. Your magic will heal you fast too, given a chance, and you even put out a low level defense against most supernatural types.” Sam told him, then waved a hand, “Don’t get me wrong, kid. It won’t stop a vamp or much else, but it will encourage them to look for another meal, given the option. Squibs are the same, so your folk are pretty safe from most of the trash around here.”

interesting info on squib.

“Yeah, that’s why a lot of us, Squibs that is, join the forces.” Sam said, “We’re tough, strong, and hard to kill. Plus the military is a good way for a kid who’s never lived in the normal world to ease into it.

not to mention when your a outsider the military offers a place to fit in, family and a place to call home.  

Anyway, I’ll show you a few tricks, and hang around town a bit to give you some pointers on the night life, k kid?”


that should make for a nice adventure.

“You serious about showing me how to use a knife?”

  Sam eyed him for a minute, “You’re not planning on killing a schoolmate, are ya?”

considering the so call security at Hogwarts Xander is most likely better off with a good blade than a wand.


great story looking forward to your next chapter.


Reviewer: bluesnowman (Signed) · Date: Sep 09 2008 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 9

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Duncan (Signed) · Date: Sep 09 2008 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 9

Excellent chapter, I really enjoyed the return to Sunnydale. Xander's family noticing his magic was a great touch, and I enjoyed the interaction.

Interesting explanation you gave on why Xander seldom was injured and nice to see Rory included in this. As always a good read, thanks.

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: Sep 09 2008 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 9

Very interesting news about the families and I look forward to what Sam can teach Xander when he finds out about the Addams friendship, a SEAL trained wizard?

Well done.

Thanks

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