Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: Dec 15 2008 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 12

magical viagra? who knew...

Reviewer: Loatroll (Signed) · Date: Oct 08 2008 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 12

By the way, I'm pretty sure it should have been:

“Xander, you’re port key is here!” should be “Xander, your port key is here!”, (You're stands for you are), and perhaps port key should be written portkey *shrugs* just suggestions :-)

Thanks for the great read!

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 13 2008 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 12

Wow and they keep on coming.

With much anticipation waiting and lurking for the reset.

Raf

Reviewer: jae (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 12 2008 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 12

this is shaping up to be a really good fiction, and extremely addictive. Love it thanks for writing.E

Reviewer: lucifael (Signed) · Date: Sep 12 2008 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 12

It's nice to see a story in whicih the Harris's seem to get their heads out of their collected arses.  I look forward to further installments as always mate.

Reviewer: Essex (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 12 2008 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 12

A nice wrap to the summer, and now they're going back to school. Lets see if Xander and Wednesday are more closely involved with theis year's adventure, or if they're once more on the periphery.

Reviewer: wraithrune (Signed) · Date: Sep 12 2008 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 12

This is great! I can't wait for Xander to begin becoming someone important at Hogwarts! ^_^ Keep it up TenHawk!

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: Sep 12 2008 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 12

Good stuff.

Reviewer: Kaerion (Signed) · Date: Sep 12 2008 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 12

I find myself really liking all of the characters you've been using lately (which, considering my opinions of abusive or neglectful parents, really says a lot), so I hope we'll see more of them later on in the story. Sam seems to be especially awesome, and while I would've liked to see more training, I suddenly remembered just how young Xander actually is, so I'm figuring you'll be making more of it once he grows up some more, and his advice so far has been great. And even though you haven't given us much of it, yet, I'm really loving the interaction between Xander, Jesse and Willow, too. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for Xander's plan working out, so that Jesse doesn't end up vamped and dusted.

Now that Xander's on his way to Salem (and eventually Hogwarts) there are so many things I'm looking forward to (more Addams family! More twins! More of Xander shaking things up without really meaning to!), but I'm especially curious about how things will go with his aunt. She seemed slightly less stuck up than the Harrises, so I have some hopes for their future interactions.

I'm loving the quick updates too, so keep feeding your muse whatever it is you've been giving her lately, and keep up the great work!

Reviewer: mrpietan (Signed) · Date: Sep 12 2008 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 12

Well, that'll speed up the homework a bit .. however, thought there was going to be a bit more in depth between sam and xander ..

Other than that one small nit ... a good update ... and we're back with the action ...

OH YEAH! You left a small plot dangling .. xander asked wednesday that question in the last chapter .. yet you've yet to give xander the answer ... ie: how can you tell which charms were used on food ...

look forward to seeing what you've written next.

Reviewer: Warren (Signed) · Date: Sep 12 2008 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 12

He experimentally scratched out his name on the wrapping paper and
was both shocked and pleased to see it write almost exactly like the
quills, only much smoother and easier to work with. He mentally
compared it to how quill work looked and was pretty sure it was almost
identical.
that will come in handy.

"Behave at school, try not to get into too much trouble, and don't
forget you're Great Aunt Lavelle is going to meet you at Salem for a
chat. Be polite."

interesting that she wants to meet him alone away from his parents and uncle.


His parents and Sam had also said they’d keep an eye on the duo, but Xander was seriously going to break the law just as soon as he could provide some good proof to Jessie and get away with it.


well that should keep them somewhat safer til Xander is older.

“Stay focused kid,” Sam said, walking into the room. “A shield is no good if you can’t keep it up.”
very good advice and something most of the students at hogwarts are never think of til its to late.




great story looking forward to your next chapter.

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