Reviewer: Loatroll (Signed) · Date: Oct 08 2008 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 14

“Thank you, thank you, we’re here on year folks.” should probably be “Thank you, thank you, we’re here all year folks.", I believe. 

Thanks for the great read.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 17 2008 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 14

Great as always.

Raf

Reviewer: Hawklan (Signed) · Date: Sep 15 2008 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 14

nice chapter again, I'm curios how the new year will go for xander

Reviewer: kcl (Signed) · Date: Sep 15 2008 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 14

Wheeee! What a great start to year two! I particularly like the third person, humorous observer approach to the flying car you created using Xander. I also like how Xander and Wednesday are becoming more of a team (and possibly more?). I can hardly wait for what comes next. Thanks again!

Reviewer: wraithrune (Signed) · Date: Sep 15 2008 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 14

... And so you're slotting everything in place in this crossover. :D I really like this story, the crossovers are smooth, and somehow this story seemed to have more posh and humor then any of your current stories.

I like all your stories ^_^ but Alexander Harris and the Shadow Council holds a special place in my heart, because Xander's hardworking, not super powered, even though he might go that path because of his hard work one day.

You did a fine job with the characterisation for Xander and Wednesday. :) Keep it up!

Reviewer: Essex (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 15 2008 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 14

Good start to the year. Nice seeing Hermione's reaction to her missing friends and a bit of verbal dueling with Draco.

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: Sep 15 2008 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 14

Cracking good chapter, especially liked the counterargument of mudbloods.

Thanks

Reviewer: greenmean (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 15 2008 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 14

typo:

Hus statement

Reviewer: mrpietan (Signed) · Date: Sep 15 2008 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 14

Thank you, thank you, we’re here on year folks.” he said with a flourish and bow, “please, no flowers, just throw money.”

error / typo -- we're here on .. should be .. all

good update though :)

Reviewer: Warren (Signed) · Date: Sep 15 2008 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 14

His statement was cut off by Wednesday's wand jabbing into his
crotch, Xander's driving up under his ear, and Hermione's glowing
between his eyes. He froze, turning remarkably pale as Xander glared
at the two bookends who had only just realized he needed help.
always good to have friends who will back you no matter what. 

“Back off.” Xander growled at Crabbe and Goyle before turning to Malfoy. “Here’s how this works. You can insult all you like, we’ll insult back. You can argue, we’ll argue back. Or you can get violent.”

  Wednesday looked up at Draco, jabbing her wand once into his groin, “And then we will get violent back... after that, you won’t insult, argue, or get violent again
. Ever.”

well that will make Xander popular with the snakes should be interesting to see if that does anything for Wednesday.


The crowd chuckled at that and began to break up. The trio were
heading in to the school when a scream went up, and they spun around
to see people pointing into the air as an old car *flew* past.

that's Harry and Ron all guts and mostly no brains.

great story looking forward to your next chapter.

Reviewer: mikerich (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 15 2008 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 14

so is xanders uncle rory's(sam axe)(cousin ASH WILLIAMSthe one who fights the deadites)going to show up.

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