Reviewer: Clell65619 (Anonymous) · Date: May 21 2010 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 16

- I really believe that this story has the fewest appearances by Harry of any Hogwarts story I've ever read.

- It's surprising, but I don't really miss him.

Reviewer: mrpietan (Signed) · Date: Sep 18 2008 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 16

Quite interesting .... and I think Xander has learned his lesson ... a secret known by 3 people will remain known to only those 3 people, if 2 of them are dead. :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 17 2008 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 16

Another great.

Raf

Reviewer: Warren (Signed) · Date: Sep 17 2008 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 16

  Narcissa sighed.

  So many things ruined by the small minds of fools who thought to play above their station. The wars had taken the lives of so many of the best and brightest of the world she loved, it seemed that the idiots had inherited what had survived.

  Wildblood.

  Narcissa reached for a quill and began to pen a note to her sister. Andy would love to hear this.


amazing the affects Xander is already causing in the wizard world. reading Narcissa thoughts its hard to beleive Draco is her son.

great story looking forward to your next chapter.


Author's Response: The thing to remember here is that Narcissa isn't exactly a muggle lover. She is, in fact, a very hard core Blood Supremist... She's just not stupid about it, or blinded by it. She understands that her bloodline grants her the responsibility of maintaining it's greatness, not the right to squander it.

Reviewer: Essex (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 17 2008 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 16

Nice handling of the fallout. I suspect that next chapter will either involve the first hints of the Chamber of Secrets plotline or some interaction with Wednesday.

Reviewer: wraithrune (Signed) · Date: Sep 17 2008 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 16

Oh!! Xander's learning so many... life lessons in slytherins, I hope he don't go bad or something. But I guess if he did, Wednesday will always smack the sense back in him.

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: Sep 17 2008 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 16

Very nicely written, especially the growing thread on wildbloods. I'm really looking forward to its development as viewed by "the Blacks".

Thanks

Reviewer: thalian (Signed) · Date: Sep 17 2008 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 16

A short but good chapter...

That prank did nearly bit him in the ass... but he did manipulate the situation enough to deflect the bame.

Secrecy was golden... indeed..

Keep up the good work!

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