Reviewer: gail (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 23 2008 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 18

The creep factor goes up and up, and it gets better and better.

Reviewer: Essex (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 23 2008 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 18

A nice chapter with some good Xander/Wednesday interaction.

Reviewer: wraithrune (Signed) · Date: Sep 23 2008 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 18

Wow ^_^ Xander's learning something new. Can't wait to see what happen.

Reviewer: thalian (Signed) · Date: Sep 23 2008 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 18

hm.... now who is it?

I hope you froze Lockhart...or had him eaten..

 

Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Warren (Signed) · Date: Sep 23 2008 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 18

“Didn’t know you cared about Harry,” he said.

  “I do not. I, however, care a great deal less about that fool.”

funny how the kids see right through his bullshit rep but the adults think he's the greatest wizard of the age.

Xander groaned softly, shaking his head, and couldn’t help but imagine just how scary the world would be if Draco Malfoy really was as good as he thought he was.

hard to beleive he got any of his mothers genes. oh well maybe she can adopt Xander.

To Charm an Image with the effect of a spell.

  That was more like it, Xander decided, and he dove into some of the coolest reading since he had discovered comic books when he was four.


that should be interesting to see.

great story looking forward to your next chapter.


 


Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: Sep 23 2008 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 18

AAARRRGGGGHHHH!!!

Too much intrigue, too early in the day.

Another great chapter.

Reviewer: bluesnowman (Signed) · Date: Sep 22 2008 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 18

Good work.

Reviewer: AnimeRonin (Signed) · Date: Sep 22 2008 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 18

Nice to see Lockhart getting a taste of his own proverbial medicine (couldn't happen to a more deserving individual).  Am curious as to where this revelation of Wednesday's ... gift?  Ability?  Either way, wonder how it'll go over.

 

More, soon, please.

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