hello Ten great story, but i have a couple of questions.....

alexander harris & the shadow council second year
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He did have some things on his mind, though. Some worries, some dark concerns.

  First, what was he going to do to his Uncle, cause there HAD to be some retaliation there. He had an idea, but wasn’t sure if it was over the top or not.


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what happened with  that prank?
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remus may contacted sirius in sunnydale? with both on them willow can overcome the average student of howgarts  and maybe a herms.......

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what happened with the backstory of tony &jessica  harris, we can know something about narcissa,sam, aunt lavelle but nothing about them.. ???

some hope to see more about them in this year ??
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have sirius and sam meeting yet??? to me, they are so similar behavior, both being a ladys man perhaps and love for machines like cars and bikes...

nice work, im waiting for the next chapters

 

 

Well, you got Dumbledore. However, I think Draco deserves a little more retribution.  A little more targeted revenge, from Xander.  Not just for the coat, but pretty much just for being himself, he's got one above average parent Draco needs incentive to emulate her not his dad.  I can hardly wait for the next chapter.  This is a very great story.

 Peace

 

Beautiful Chapter. I quite enjoy the little story you've woven here.

Great update. I have been following this story since the beginning and this shows real promise. If this goes according the shows then Xander should meet Buffy when he is 16 i think so that will be in his 6th year. Will you be warping up the HP verse before that ? I also saw a refrence to Lycans from underworld i think. THis story has alot of potential. Keep up the good work!

Lovely chapter.
The fight went well with Xander's hard won skills from the summer before. Ron is beginning to appreciate Xander and maybe getting his view of the world expanded.
If nothing else develops on the duelling training for Harry maybe Xander can coach Harry, Ron, Hermione,on what he has learned.
If the Lavelle family's scheme comes to fruition at least Narcissa will be happy.
Doesn't Lucius have any notion yet that the most powerful and valuable thing he got from his marriage was his wife?

The wards explain a lot as does the hellmouth effect, nicely tied up.

Cheers :)

as always love your stories ... love the way you potray xander in your stories... best work since the journey verse series...and fyrecat can you stop with the corrections advice ... tenhawk needs to focus on more new chapters not gong back and changing spelling on old chapters ... look at it this way for every word you correct , that could have been another word for another chapter

I seem to Recall Xander made a liitle wand that produced a small but powerfull sheild, what if it stops the Death Curse and other Unforgivables?

Peace

hp/btvs stories that ive read so far are always a good read but your story has just in my own honest opinion surpassed any others ive read so far its just grown from the first chapter youve captured the addams family/btvs/hp characters/worlds and meshed them beautifully together i cant wait for the next installment without some trepidation .

Interesting start. BTW I loved the substitution of the word head for the word heat in this sentence:
"It was large, with two fireplaces providing head. " Randy lot those Slytherins.
And here there was another typo - unfortunately not humorous like the heat/head one - 'Well I suppose it’s not a *rule* per say, ' per say should be per se

so more people can use wands than staffs? How many more will be able to use zanders new wand? zander knows alot of squibs.. Love the story

This story is one of the best Xander fanfictions that actually regularly updates...It doesn't have a super Xander to ruin the story as well, just a competent one. Though I was wondering if that would change when he gets a wand properly suited to him. During his wand selection Ollivander didn't think his wand was best for him, "That is the best match of any wand in my shop." is what he said. So I'm wondering how good he'd be with one that was suited for him 

'stupefy' not 'stupify', 'were the people' not 'was the people', 'idiot savant' not 'idiosavant', 'sent there' not 'sent their', 'held out an envelope' not 'held out an envelop' (ditto for several uses of 'the envelop').

For all that there are less spelling and grammatical errors than in most fanfiction.

Author's Response: all true except idiosavant, in which the term was used in speech and I could have had her say JKHOBD and it would still be correct, if only cause she apparently has a really heavy accent.

Interesting beginning.

I don't normally like Hary Potter crossovers, but this one has grabbed my attention.

Keep up the good work!

I have really enjoyed the first chapter and have made a file of the 55 chapters for my Palm ereader. I expect I will enjoy the rest of it as well.

Is there any way of getting update notices?

dave 

dave@netconnect.com.au 

looks like the Slytherin common room is the place to be!

"The portrait swing open and Xander and the others got their first view of the Slytherin Common room. It was large, with two fireplaces providing head.

Just a quick bit.  It's "Cara Mia" not "Cada Mia."  It's Italian for "My Heart" - Cara being Heart (like coeur in french).

Please update its been forever.

 -Sacred

The dire wolf cub made me laugh so loud it offended my cat and she left the room.  I have grand hopes for that puppy.

 Great writing as usual.  =) 

Spot on!

Hugely enjoyable :)

I didn't notice it the first time, but both Xander's and Wednesday's wands have dragon heartstring cores.   Are their wands brother wands (cores from the same dragon)?

Theres a few spelling errors I cought but I think you got Xander down pat.

 

Great as always.

Unrelated question: When will you be posting the first chapter of "Men of War"?

Hey Ten;

 

This is more a general question; but can anything be done about the black block that shows up in your stories?  It's been in nearly every chapter i've read, and it's kind of annoying.

 

Also, did you mean to post the new chapter at the top of this chapter?

 

Red

excellent story, as expected from the Great Tenhawk. am loooking forward to more as soon as he can get around to it. i know other things may be in the works, but i can wait for fic of this calibre.  thanks for telling these stories, they tell tales that no one else could come up with....